Silver Tongue
deviantartwhy:
“ yikes the quality is shitty. But my room is dark.
So my friends never really tell me what the problems in my art are. One of them does but she’s a total bitch about it. So I kinda need some input.
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The waist is too skinny and the...

deviantartwhy:

yikes the quality is shitty. But my room is dark.
So my friends never really tell me what the problems in my art are. One of them does but she’s a total bitch about it. So I kinda need some input.

The waist is too skinny and the neck is too far onto one side of the body rather than the middle. You’re avoiding drawing hands and eyes properly and are using baggy jeans to avoid proper legs.

Try drawing in different clothing and have the head at different angles. Also make her waist thicker because it looks like she has an invisible rope squeezing her.

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