falling-rivers:

lightwolf:

lightwolf:

Editing? Oh you mean fic patching.

• Protagonist now has more complex motivations.
• Protagonist now remembers key facts about important people. He no longer develops convenient amnesia between cutscenes.
• Protagonist now has a cooldown on certain adverbs. Adverbs have been buffed by 30% to compensate.
• Developer note: Adverbs are important to writing but they are sometimes overused. This change keeps adverbs relevant while encouraging the use of adjectives and verbs.
• The horse now has a name.
• Deuteragonist snark power has been increased to 150, up from 75.

*the horse now has a name*

okay but by naming the horse you delete the scene where they ride through the desert