books-read-in-nooks

When the author describes a character’s appearance way too late and you have to quickly redesign the image you already have for them in your head:

prismatic-bell

This is why if you want people to know your character has long raven-black hair with red streaks and eyes like limpid tears, you need to make sure you say so in your first paragraph. Christ. Imagine someone thinking your character’s a prep.

silver-tongues-blog

Sounds like a passing resemblance to amy lee (if u dont know who she is, get da hell out of here!)